{"id":5767,"date":"2026-03-30T14:56:28","date_gmt":"2026-03-30T19:56:28","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.eastcentral.edu\/learning-center\/?page_id=5767"},"modified":"2026-03-30T15:03:08","modified_gmt":"2026-03-30T20:03:08","slug":"energize-your-writing-with-strong-verbs","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/www.eastcentral.edu\/learning-center\/energize-your-writing-with-strong-verbs\/","title":{"rendered":"Energize Your Writing with Strong Verbs"},"content":{"rendered":"
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Step 1: Replace To Be<\/em> Verbs<\/h2>\n\n\n

It is virtually impossible to write without using to be<\/em> verbs. However, most people overuse these verbs,\u00a0 and the result is lackluster prose. The problem is, to be<\/em> verbs just do not convey the same dynamism as stronger, more exciting verbs. If you want to energize your writing, try these techniques:<\/p>\n

1. Replace the to be<\/em> verb with a more expressive verb:<\/strong><\/div>\n
Ex. The coach is<\/strong> loud during games.<\/div>\n
Vs. The coach shouts<\/strong> during games.<\/div>\n
Ex. The caf\u00e9\u2019s sandwiches are<\/strong> excellent.<\/div>\n
Vs. The caf\u00e9 serves<\/strong> excellent sandwiches.<\/div>\n
Ex. The student is<\/strong> afraid of failing the test.<\/div>\n

Vs. The student fears<\/strong> failing the test.<\/p>\n

2. Change a noun into a verb:<\/strong><\/div>\n
Ex. Our uncle is<\/strong> the driver<\/strong> of the bus.<\/div>\n

Vs. Our uncle drives<\/strong> the bus.<\/p>\n

3. Combine short, choppy sentences:<\/strong><\/div>\n
Ex. The band\u2019s music is<\/strong> excellent. The lyrics are<\/strong> meaningful. The melodies are<\/strong> catchy.<\/div>\n
The percussion is<\/strong> energetic.<\/div>\n

Vs. The band plays<\/strong> excellent music, with meaningful lyrics, catchy melodies, and energetic percussion.<\/p>\n

4. Do not overuse there is<\/em>, there are, there were, this is, that are,<\/em> etc.:<\/strong><\/div>\n
Ex. There are<\/strong> many apartments that are<\/strong> empty and need new tenants.<\/div>\n

Vs. Many empty apartments need<\/strong> new tenants.<\/p>\n

5. Replace a to be verb + a prepositional phrase with a strong verb:<\/strong><\/div>\n
Ex. Social media is<\/strong> influential for millennials.<\/div>\n

Vs. Social media influences<\/strong> millennials.<\/p>\n

6. Replace a to be verb + an \u2013ing<\/em> word with a simple verb:<\/strong><\/div>\n
Ex. The cat was scratching<\/strong> at the back door.<\/div>\n
Vs. The cat scratched<\/strong> at the back door.<\/div>\n
Ex. The dragonfly was hovering<\/strong> over the pond.<\/div>\n

Vs. The dragonfly hovered<\/strong> over the pond<\/p>\n\n\n

Step 2: Avoid Adverbs<\/h2>\n\n\n

In his book, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft<\/em>, Stephen King exclaims, \u201cI believe the road to hell is paved with adverbs, and I will shout it from the rooftops.\u201d He makes an excellent point. Rather than using a verb + adverb combination<\/strong>, it is better to use a verb that is strong enough to stand on its own. <\/p>\n

Ex. He went quickly<\/strong> to the store.<\/div>\n
Vs. He hurried<\/strong> to the store.<\/div>\n
Ex. She looked angrily<\/strong> at her friend.<\/div>\n
Vs. She glared<\/strong> at her friend.<\/div>\n
Ex. He messily wrote<\/strong> his name at the bottom of the contract.<\/div>\n

Vs. He scrawled<\/strong> his name at the bottom of the contract.<\/p>\n\n\n

Step 3: Get Creative with Verbs<\/h2>\n\n\n

Still trying to think of better verbs? Here are four common verbs with stronger alternatives:<\/p>\n

\u2022 Said:<\/strong> announced, uttered, suggested, stuttered, argued, bellowed, whispered
\u2022 Looked:<\/strong> surveyed, gazed, stared, glanced, squinted, leered
\u2022 Walked:<\/strong> sauntered, strolled, traipsed, tramped, marched, hiked, ambled, plodded
\u2022 Went:<\/strong> fled, passed, moseyed, left, set off, withdrew, took flight, set off<\/p>\n\n\n

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Updated August 2023 by The Learning Center staff<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div><\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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